- Write to a targeted audience
Unless money is no object, you have to define your audience beyond
simply "people on the Internet."
You must know EXACTLY who your niche market is
and then target your salescopy to precisely what they're looking
for if you want them to stay on your site long enough to buy something.
Ideally you've already defined who your target market is -- How
old are they? What is their education level? What problems are they
trying to solve? (If you don't know the answers to these questions,
consider going back and doing a little more research!)
Whoever they are, you need to write in a voice that appeals
to them. If your target market is teenagers, they'll be
gone in a flash if your salescopy reads like something out of Business
Week!
And if your audience is looking for sump pumps, they'll probably
be turned right off if you come off sounding like a surfer dude...
Knowing your audience also lets you anticipate any questions or
objections they might have so that you can address these in your
copy... just the way a sales rep would in person.
- Create an attention-grabbing headline
A winning headline gets straight to the point and addresses
the reason your visitor has come to your site. The MOST effective
headlines promise an answer to the problem your visitor has arrived
on your site trying to solve.
Here are a couple of examples of irrelevant, ineffective headlines:
"Welcome to www.MyWebsite.com!"
"WidgetWorld -- the solution to all your drainage problems!
Now, take a look at these compelling, eye-catching
headlines from two entrepreneurs we interviewed for our private
"Secrets
to their Success" web site.
From Penny Halgren's How-To-Quilt.com:
"Now, In Just 9 Easy Steps, You Can Transform Ordinary Fabric
Into a Handmade Quilt That Your Family and Friends Will Love,
Admire and Cherish – Even If You Have Never Made a Quilt Before!"
And from Darren Salkeld's Down-Feather-Bedding.com:
"Have you been
searching for luxury goose down comforters -- at places
such as Amazon.com, Bizrate.com, Overstock.com , eBay.com (just to name a few) -- but cannot decipher all the hype
from the true quality!?
Finally... Get all of the
facts that surround the luxury goose down bedding business --
including insider information AND closely guarded
industry secrets -- so you
can make a totally informed decision for your entire family's
well being!"
See the difference?
The last two headlines address precisely what the target web site
visitor is looking for. If you keep your headline highly relevant,
simple, and specific, chances are good that your reader
will continue on to read more of what you have to say.
And don't worry if your headlines are long -- long means you can
include more detail, which will attract a more targeted audience!
- Establish your credibility
Put yourself in your visitors' place. They've landed on
your site looking for the solution to a problem, but they're just
two clicks away from dozens or even hundreds of other sites that
also offer a solution.
Why should they believe what you have to say? You have
to prove very early on that what you're about to tell them can be
trusted.
There are a few ways you can do this...
- Give your credentials: Written
a best-selling book on your subject? Got a related PhD or 20
years of experience in the field? Are YOU the inventor of the
widget you're selling? Have well-known people bought your product
or used your services?
Detailing your credentials helps to establish you as an authority
on your subject in the eyes of your reader, and will put you
one step closer to making the sale.
- Tell a story: How did you come
up with the idea for your product or service? Were you trying
to solve the same problem as your potential customers and decided
to create your own solution? Or did you go to the ends of the
earth to find a solution, and here it is?
Explain the story behind your business and your readers will
relate to you as a person, rather than just seeing a faceless
commercial web site. As a bonus, your story will keep them reading.
- Use testimonials: Results-packed
testimonials from happy customers are the MOST powerful trust-builder
of all.
The key is to make sure your testimonials are specific, describing
the exact results your customer experienced
by using your product or service. Include the person's name,
company name, and URL if possible to show there is a real live
person behind the rave review.
While it's always great to hear back from a happy customer,
when it comes to using their feedback in your web site copy
not all testimonials are created equal.
Here's an example of a testimonial that doesn't pack much of
a punch:
I really like your product.
It's great. Thanks!
Compare that testimonial to this one from
one of our Internet success stories, featured on our main site,
http://www.marketingtips.com/:
"We have sold many thousands of
Powerballs, and made over $1,000,000 last year from
faithfully applying the advice and operating principles to
our business model that your company has given!
You have also given me the necessary tools...
to be able to finally sit back and enjoy the wealth
that the web has helped to create for me."
Rory McLoughney,
RPM Sports Ltd.
http://www.powerballs.co.uk/
The most effective testimonials spell out
the concrete results your customers have achieved after buying
your product or service, so visitors can see that you deliver
the goods.
- Add a strong guarantee: Considering
that your product or service can't be touched or sampled over
the Internet, many consumers are understandably cautious about
buying online.
A strong guarantee showing you stand behind what you're selling
helps alleviate their concerns and reduce the risk of buying
from you.
Take a look at how Mark Bowden of Spex4Less.com builds
confidence with his ironclad guarantee:

By offering a no-questions-asked, money-back guarantee, you
DO run the risk of dealing with refunds and returns. But considering
that you'll likely get more sales than you would have without
the guarantee, the reward definitely outweighs the risk.
Also, the longer return period you allow, the better! We recommend
a minimum 90-day guarantee.
Anything less is simply too flimsy, and may cause your customers
to stress about the short length of time they've got... and
then fire returns back to you.
On the other hand, the longer guarantee period you offer, the
fewer returns you'll get! With an extended time period, most
customers know they have all the time in the world to try out
your product, and most won't want to deal with the hassle of
sending it back.
For some of our products, we even offer a lifetime
guarantee!
- Talk about benefits, not just
features
Your potential customers want to know how your product
or service will make THEIR lives easier. Drive this home by focusing
on benefits, not just features.
What's the difference?
A feature is a particular highlight of a product or service,
while a benefit is what the buyer actually gets from using
the feature.
Here are a few examples:
Feature: "The Grade A Gardening
Shovel is ergonomically designed to remove weeds more efficiently
than traditional shovels."
Benefit: "Get your weeding done in half the time AND
reduce wrist soreness!"
Here's another one:
Feature: "Acme Deluxe Cleaner
cleans both floors AND windows."
Benefit: "Buy fewer cleaning supplies and save your money!"
Attaching a benefit to the feature answers your
visitor's question: "What's in it for me?" and gets them to imagine
using your product to take care of the problem they're trying to
solve.
Put them in the picture by using "you" and "your" to create an immediate
connection with what you're selling.
- Add a sense of urgency for immediate sales
Now that your readers know where to find you on the Web,
they may decide to surf around some more, think things over, and
come back later. This means you lose the momentum you've created
so far in your salescopy, and chances are that once your visitors
leave your site, they won't be back.
You need to give your visitors a good reason to buy NOW rather than
later. Offering a limited quantity of products or offering them
only for a limited time can give them the nudge they need to pull
out their credit cards.
Coupons or discounts that expire also motivate potential customers.
Another option is to offer a special bonus item for a limited time.
For example: "This special bonus is available ONLY to the first
200 people who order!"
- Format for easy scanning
Have you read every word of this newsletter? I doubt it.
The Internet has changed the way people read. In fact, when it comes
to web pages, they don't! They scan. Only 16% read
word by word, according to a study by Jakob Nielsen.
Long essay-style paragraphs simply look like too much work to read,
and they're a surefire way to turn visitors off and sink sales.
Your visitors should never have to work to find out what your product
or service is about!
Even though your potential customers probably won't read every word
of your salescopy, you CAN encourage them to go through it from
top to bottom by making it scannable.
Break up your text with these techniques:
- Use bulleted lists and subheads
- Make short, chunky paragraphs of one to four lines
-- and mix them up
- Emphasize important points with bolding,
highlighting, or italics
- Use a plain font like Arial or Verdana
- Use only relevant graphics and images
- Put your text on an unpatterned, white or light
background
- Ask for the order
Okay, so you've attracted your readers' attention, and drawn them
through the salescopy by explaining the features and benefits of
your product or service. So NOW what?
Ask for the order!
At this point it's crucial that you spell out EXACTLY what you want
your reader to do. Here are a few ways to spell it out and ask for
the order:
To order now and receive your copy within
minutes, click here!"
"Click here to take advantage of this limited time offer!"
"To get your widget -- backed by our 100% risk-free guarantee
-- click here now!"
If you don't make the next step absolutely crystal
clear for your readers, there's no telling how many sales might
be slipping through your fingers.
An attention-grabbing headline, credibility, benefits,
urgency, scannability, and clear direction to a targeted audience...
add these elements to your web site and you'll create a sales powerhouse!
To see all of these
essential salescopy elements in action, check out the salesletter
for our best-selling "Insider Secrets" course. Click here!
We spent 15 days performing 28 separate tests on this salesletter
to make sure every element is as compelling as it can be... which
reminds me:
Why you MUST
test your salescopy for maximum results
Your salescopy is the cornerstone of your online
business, and not knowing how well it's performing is like betting
the bank on a blind racehorse!
If testing is something relatively new for you, a good
idea is to modify one element of your salescopy each week and monitor
what happens to your conversion rate. As you make each small change
one at a time, it should become apparent if your modification has
a positive or negative effect on your sales.
You can try:
- Modifying your headline
- Swapping in new testimonials
- Adding revamped features and benefits
- Moving your price up or down
- Changing your formatting
You'd be surprised how a small change to one element
of your site can mean a BIG difference to your sales!
A great beginners' testing tool you may want to try out
is http://crazyegg.com/, a software
program that runs silently and transparently on your web site. A free
trial version allows you to track up to 5,000 visitors to see how
they react to the salescopy on your site.
For more in-depth detail on testing, check out a previous
issue of our newsletter at: www.marketingtips.com/newsletters/?article=art_july05.
(Scroll down to the second-last section to find the material on testing.)
Final thoughts
When it comes to your online business, your salescopy
is your one and only chance to communicate directly
with your potential customers and tell them WHY they should buy from
you over someone else.
Since so many Netrepreneurs overlook the importance of
well-written salescopy, you're already ahead of the game
just by making sure your copy includes the crucial elements we've
talked about here!
And by testing the different components of your salescopy
-- regularly! -- you'll know how well your site is performing and
what, if anything, needs to be changed to prevent potential sales
from going down the drain.
If you're intimidated at the thought of writing salescopy,
or simply don't have the time to tackle it, consider hiring a professional
to do it for you.
... Just make sure they include the seven important elements
we've talked about here! (You can find freelance writers at Elance.)
On the other hand, if you want to learn copywriting techniques
for yourself, turn to the experts to get the tips you need to write
money-making copy.
In our Insider Secrets to Marketing Your Business on the Internet,
we lay out exactly how to write successful salescopy
in 12 easy-to-follow steps. With these copywriting techniques and
a little practice, you could be turning a whole lot more of your web
site visitors into paying customers!
ABOUT THE AUTHOR:
Derek Gehl specializes in teaching real people how to start profitable
Internet businesses that make $100,000 to $2.5 Million (or more) per
year. To get instant access to all his most profitable marketing campaigns,
strategies, tools, and resources that he's used to grow $25 into over
$40 Million in online sales, visit his
website, just click here!
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